I don't have the right angle to explore it but it is absurd here at times when we get an extreme cold snap and there are people on bicycles dodging snowplows. It cannot be enjoyable
The narrative in this post seems to jump around a bit more than usual. It doesn't flow. You seem to jump from one topic to another and then back again. Part of this feeling might be the way you divide all your posts. I have mentioned it before, but "The Inspiration" The Setup" "The Details, particularily in a short post, doesn't work for me.
I have worked to shorten these and I think I agree that the three parts aren't necessary. I am approaching a format change where I take those headings inside the paragraphs. THANKS!
“the American bicycle intelligentsia“ haha I think I know what you mean!
I don't have the right angle to explore it but it is absurd here at times when we get an extreme cold snap and there are people on bicycles dodging snowplows. It cannot be enjoyable
The narrative in this post seems to jump around a bit more than usual. It doesn't flow. You seem to jump from one topic to another and then back again. Part of this feeling might be the way you divide all your posts. I have mentioned it before, but "The Inspiration" The Setup" "The Details, particularily in a short post, doesn't work for me.
I have worked to shorten these and I think I agree that the three parts aren't necessary. I am approaching a format change where I take those headings inside the paragraphs. THANKS!