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John Loch's avatar

The narrative in this post seems to jump around a bit more than usual. It doesn't flow. You seem to jump from one topic to another and then back again. Part of this feeling might be the way you divide all your posts. I have mentioned it before, but "The Inspiration" The Setup" "The Details, particularily in a short post, doesn't work for me.

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Anne Kadet's avatar

“the American bicycle intelligentsia“ haha I think I know what you mean!

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